Wednesday, November 14, 2012

Random musings

I'm currently reading Atlas Shrugged because I apparently hate myself. I mean that more in terms of length than content because the book actually reads fairly well. It's just that...there's a lot of it there. Atlas Shrugged goes in the same killer paperback/doorstop category as one of George R.R. Martin's books...if I were in danger and had to choose a paperback to whack someone with, I'd pick something from A Song of Ice and Fire or the Ayn Rand book.

My wife and I have been watching the History Channel series "The Men Who Built America." Very interesting stuff; I've always found the era of the great captains of industry/robber barons fascinating. Perhaps I'm reading Atlas Shrugged because many of its themes fit with the TV series in terms of labor vs. industry and whether people who have made ungodly amounts of money should be allowed to do so.

Certainly something to think about.

On TV last night: Kingdom of Heaven. This is a terrific movie (I speak of the director's cut) with a rich, complex sense of history and characters. I missed my favorite line, which comes from Jeremy Irons as Tiberias: "That I would rather live with men than kill them is certainly why you are alive."

I did catch one of my favorite exchanges from the movie:
Balian: What is Jerusalem worth?

Saladin: Nothing. [walks away, pauses] Everything!
Hoping to catch Lincoln this weekend. My wife is certainly excited about the movie. We'll have to fight off the Twi-hards, but it'll be worth it. Thanks to the fact that my wife works Saturday and Sunday AND the Colts have a late kickoff against the Patriots, we're opting for a Sunday night showing.

My college course about writing news for broadcast is winding down. I've had a great class and have really enjoyed the experience. It's been difficult to fit everything in this semester--I work full time, write part time, and teach part time. The writing has suffered a little bit because Tuesday and Thursday nights are booked up with the class. I spend most of my weekend preparing lectures and reviewing material. Plus, there must be football.

Despite that, I'm still chipping away at III Crimsonstreak. Now at 22,000 words for the first draft, I'm hoping to get past the halfway point before revisions come back for its predecessor. Maybe I'll get there and maybe I won't.

Monday, November 12, 2012

III Crimsonstreak latest

I've been able to write about 22,000 words on III Crimsonstreak. Not bad for a couple weeks of work. I'm not doing NaNoWriMo, but I kind of am; I began the first draft just a few days before the official start of NaNoWriMo. So while I'm not really participating in National Novel Writing Month, I am keeping tabs on some friends who are doing it.

III Crimsonstreak picks up where II Crimsonstreak ends. Our hero (MINOR SPOILER) gets stuck in a kind of purgatory. In III Crimsonstreak, we get him out. For reasons related to spoilery-ness in the sequel, time and space have become fractured, which gives me the opportunity to move Crimsonstreak around in different time periods. Expect some nonsensical time travel/time loop stuff.

Currently, Crimsonstreak is stuck in the Old West with some other characters who have also been displaced.

Friday, November 9, 2012

Colts Observations, Week 10


Them's the breaks, sweetheart. A fortuitous pass interference penalty. A fortuitous roughing the passer penalty. A fortuitous fumble challenge. A fortuitous upheld touchdown. A fortuitous overturned catch. The Colts certainly got some breaks this week--proving that sometimes you need some luck even when you already have Luck.

Hit 'em hard, hit 'em early. The Colts jumped out to a 17-0 lead in the first half. Jacksonville's drives sputtered--and they missed a field goal. This one was over early.

Tough Luck. Oh, will the Luck-related puns ever end? No. You know why? Because they're easy. Anyway, Luck showed his toughness on multiple occasions, hitting Jacksonville defensive back Dawan Landry after throwing an interception. Later, Luck got blasted while sliding. He hopped right back up, calmed down his teammates, and then shook hands with the defender in gentlemanly fashion.

Effective use of the challenge. For the first time in what seems like forever, the challenge curse of Dungy, Caldwell, and Arians seemed to go away. We shall always remember the glorious Thursday evening when the team's challenges made sense...and actually worked.

Rush, rush. Luck had two rushing touchdowns (although let's face it--the "QB sneak" was a fortuitous call). On the season, he has five rushing touchdowns. Apparently, that's a Colts QB record and puts "AL1" only one rushing touchdown behind RG3. As a team, the Colts had 138 yards. It was, again, just enough to keep the defense honest.

Reggie. That is all.

The Butler did it. Solid analysis always includes bad, predictable puns. Darius Butler had two interceptions and a recovered fumble. After a highly publicized turnover drought, Butler had three--accounting for half of the Colts' forced turnovers this season. Not bad for this week's Random Colts Player of the Game.

Like clubbing a baby sea lion. The Jaguars are bad. So, so, so bad. The score was 27-10, but it may as have been 45-10. Once Darius Butler took the interception back for a touchdown, the game was effectively over. You could even make the argument that the second Colts TD--the QB sneak--sealed the deal.

Get that man the ball. T.Y. Hilton is a dangerous, dangerous man in the open field. One of these days, he'll break off a big punt return. I liked how the Colts used him a couple times to run the ball.

Vinny on target. Each time Adam Vinatieri lined up to kick, I held my breath. Thankfully, he was on target this week.

Hey, we got it. Luck's good. I realize Thursday's game was the first time a national audience got to see Luck in action. Still, praise for the young quarterback bordered on "hero worship," with Mike Mayock admitting on multiple occasions that he "didn't want to talk too much" about Luck only to continue to talk about him. The poor kid's going to get the Manning Effect--we'll love him, everyone else will hate him--because the national media won't stop talking about him.

No MJD, thank you very much. The Jags' only true star, Maurice Jones-Drew, is injured. Considering he turns Colts defenders into puppies who can't tackle, I can't say I missed him very much. Jacksonville did, however. They had no running game to speak of.

Under pressure. Indy notched four sacks and could've had more. They were in Blaine Gabbert's face all game. Even though he's not 100%, Dwight Freeney seemed to regain some of his burst despite the short week. Nice cameos in the backfield by Tom Zbikowski and Antonie Bethea, too. I thought the defense played very aggressively.

Showing some mettle. Listen, I know Jacksonville is having a bad season. Still, they beat the Colts at home earlier this year. Winning on the road on a short week isn't easy...and for a young team like the Colts, it would've been very easy to lose focus. This team simply didn't let that happen against their AFC South rival.

Secondary concerns. The ballyhooed trade for Vontae Davis has been a bust because the kid can't stay healthy. Jerraud Powers is out with a foot injury. That all became a truly secondary concern when Cassius Vaughn and Darius Butler had solid nights at corner.

Shorts circuit. If I were a Jags fan, about the only positive thing I could point to would be the play of Cecil Shorts III. That guy is explosive. He broke a couple of huge plays and had the Jags' only touchdown.

A little shorthanded. The Colts played this one without Samson Satele, Robert Mathis, Winston Justice, Coby Fleener, Jerraud Powers, and Vontae Davis.

At times, they seemed to lack cohesion. The offensive line play wasn't horrible for the Colts, but they had a few breakdowns and Luck paid for them. I know you're going to get beat every once in a while, but the line play didn't seem quite as sharp as in past weeks. I think that's because of some injuries along the ever-shuffling line.

Missing "the feel." Primetime NFL games usually have a feel--a sense of electricity in the air among fans and players. Perhaps it was the inevitability of the outcome or the Jacksonville fans who seemed more interested in Roger Goodell than their team, but this one seemed "flat" all the way around.

In the hunt...and it's for real. The Colts are 6-3. If they continue to play well, there is a chance that they'll finish with a record above .500 and grab a Wild Card spot. It'll be interesting to see how big those games against Houston--the teams play twice in three weeks--end up being.

Gotta clean it up. Were the Colts playing an actual NFL team instead of the cursed Jaguars, this would've been a nail-biter. The Colts gave the ball away a couple times in scoring position and were fortunate to get a couple breaks. With Foxborough looming, they have to play a cleaner game.